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PostSubject: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 4:18 am

So yeah...I will go over these tomorrow and revise them a bit more, because I'm tired and I'm probably not making any sense. BUUUUT. The good news is that the rough draft is complete. I just felt like sharing my fail. XD

EDIT: Revised a bit. hopefully they flow a bit better. I'll be recording a sample today (maybe).
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One of Repetition
Originally Sung by: Miku Hatsune
English Lyrics by: SaigoSentinel


I’m seeing something that I wish I had never seen,
something in this world that has absolutely no meaning.
I will never put myself in that position
that is my one and absolute mission

You don’t need me anymore,
I am nothing but a chore,
you didn’t say it straight but I know you better.
You could never understand the way you’ve made me feel,
I can’t do this now…

It’s always, It’s always, okay to let go of it,
the dream that we’ll always be together won’t come true
the light fades, and the shades, become clearly visible.
And it goes together with a solemn sigh…

I’m falling, I’m falling, into the deepest nightmare,
where I see a painting of you and I torn apart
In my dreams, it starts with, visions of the near ending
No more am, I in the place I wish to be.

However…

I wanted to hold hands with you,
I wanted to share thoughts with you,
Even though I knew that someday you’d outgrow me,

I wanted,

Every bit of the lie to come true,
and of course for you to love me too
but of course I was just flying around in lovesick wonderland!

Love was a sweet fairytale of two people in one,
but right now I am wondering if it was a joke,
I guess I was a reminder of your sweet childhood,
but I wonder when I get old will you throw me out?

It was a feeling of love straight from my broken heart,
but you never cared about that so you tore it apart,
you were always one to have a solid backup plan,
I wonder what you’ll do when your bluebird won’t sing?

I remember good times, I remember bad times,
I remember times when you told me goodbye
But I can't remember times when these feelings weren’t real,

Sayonara…

No longer, can I hide, the emotional scars now
I can’t cry, I can’t cry, the tears have left me behind,
It was a so precious, temptation that I caved to,
so why did I taint it with my stubborn love?

Just like you,

It was easy to ignore you at first,
but I saw you every day and I knew
that we would never be together again after that

I knew that

Like a TV show plays those re-runs,
I knew the miserable end to this one
but of course I was manipulated in lovesick wonderland!

The truth about falling in love is nothing but
the lies and the stories that they tell in the movies,
would you watch my story on the TV every day,
and then forget all about me in every single way…

To you it’s not an important concept to love
it’s only a hobby, that you are rather fond of
but have you even thought about what you’d regret?
No but soon you’ll understand what I mean…

Love was a sweet fairytale of two people in one,
but right now I am wondering if it was a joke,
Do you get a cheap laugh out of bringing misery?
I wasn’t ever enough for you, you wanted something new.

The truth about falling in love is nothing but
the lies and the stories that they tell in the movies,
would you watch my story on the TV every day,
because I will watch you and remember the good old days…

I’m seeing something that I wish I had never seen,
something in this world that has absolutely no meaning.
I will never put myself in that position
that is my one and absolute mission

You don’t need me anymore,
I am nothing but a chore,
you didn’t say it straight but I know you better.
You could never understand the way you’ve made me feel,
I can’t do this now…

It was a feeling of love straight from my broken heart,
but you never cared about that so you tore it apart,
you were always one to have a solid backup plan,
I wonder what you’ll do when your bluebird won’t sing?
I remember good times, I remember bad times,
I remember times when you told me goodbye
But I can't remember times when these feelings weren't real,

Sayonara…


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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 4:23 am

I'm having fun singing along with this lol. xD GJ bro, srsly
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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 4:26 am

shannaroooooo wrote:
I'm having fun singing along with this lol. xD GJ bro, srsly

I'm glad!
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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 4:38 pm

I updated the lyrics a bit, will hopefully be recording a sample before too long. XD
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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 4:46 pm

Woah, these are really nice! *A* I see no reason why we can't go with using these, I won't worry about writing any. 8'D
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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 10:39 pm

This is amazing!
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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 11:32 pm

ryuu_pyon wrote:
This is amazing!

Thanks! I'm glad you think so!
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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 1:30 am

You did wonderfully. Great job!
I listened to your reference and it was incredible. You did amazing. Very happy with this. C':
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PostSubject: Re: One of Repetition {OTL}   One of Repetition {OTL} EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 2:50 am

I appreciate it, Jayn! I was really unsure of how they were

Glad to be writing for this, I can't wait till it's complete!
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